Thanks for the feedback, Steve. It is appreciated especially comparing it to Black Mirror!
To be honest, I am not sure of the origins of this one. It may have come from one of those frustrating dreams, but I cannot remember having one like this, but it was written in 2010 and memory fades. Someone else told me it reminded them of one of the last scenes in the Dr. Zhivago film where he has the heart attack chasing who he thinks is Lara. Again I cannot remember if this had any connection. So “it is a mystery” – sticking to the Dr. Zhivago thread!

I would encourage you or anyone to do something with your “ramblings”. It is a good hobby for us as we age. And to be honest, you never know who will read, like or comment on your writing and ones I sometimes think, dare I publish this as I am not confident its quality usually turn out to be the ones people like! Good luck.

I’m thinking of publishing my ramblings I have written to Grok3