Comments for Graham Lawrence

Comment on Suspicious Minds by Graham Lawrence

Graham Lawrence — Sat, 25 Jul 2026 03:35:57 +0000

Thanks for the feedback, Bob. It all started when waking up and remembering the specific version of the song and the final thing the driver said about the bullet smashing through Phompat’s false teeth…

“They said and did nothing as the story of Phompat leaving us disappeared quicker than the bullet smashed its way through his false teeth”

Comment on Suspicious Minds by Bob DCosta

Bob DCosta — Fri, 24 Jul 2026 15:33:47 +0000

A different kind of dream hanging on an interesting thread to make the reader keep on going with his reading… Enjoyed it..!

Comment on Suspicious Minds by Graham Lawrence

Graham Lawrence — Sun, 12 Jul 2026 08:03:06 +0000

In reply to Simon Rowe. Interesting comments Simon. I am not really sure where this one came from - a mix of things probably. Thanks for the Quiet American comment! Enjoy FYC

Comment on Suspicious Minds by Simon Rowe

Simon Rowe — Sun, 12 Jul 2026 07:50:14 +0000

Well, that propelled me back to Bangkok circa early 1990s. I think I still have my stash of Khao San Road knock-off tapes still lying around somewhere. Felt a distinct “A Quiet American” vibe and had to smile at the inclusion of FYC — I’ve only just started listening to them again recently. Good stuff.

Comment on Piece by Graham Lawrence

Graham Lawrence — Tue, 31 Mar 2026 07:14:11 +0000

In reply to Steve Smith. Nice comment and amusing, my friend.

Comment on Piece by Steve Smith

Steve Smith — Tue, 31 Mar 2026 06:17:31 +0000

Give piece a chance.

Comment on Hope by Graham Lawrence

Graham Lawrence — Sun, 20 Jul 2025 04:13:49 +0000

In reply to Steve Smith. Hi Steve. I am glad you enjoyed it and that it brought back memories, which were hopefully fond memories!

Comment on Hope by Steve Smith

Steve Smith — Sun, 20 Jul 2025 02:01:04 +0000

Great story Graham, reminds me of my youth. I was a Mod and had Vespa scooter. Cost me 40 quid.

Comment on Lita by Graham Lawrence

Graham Lawrence — Fri, 18 Apr 2025 03:56:24 +0000

In reply to Steve Smith.

Thanks for the feedback, Steve. It is appreciated especially comparing it to Black Mirror!
To be honest, I am not sure of the origins of this one. It may have come from one of those frustrating dreams, but I cannot remember having one like this, but it was written in 2010 and memory fades. Someone else told me it reminded them of one of the last scenes in the Dr. Zhivago film where he has the heart attack chasing who he thinks is Lara. Again I cannot remember if this had any connection. So “it is a mystery” – sticking to the Dr. Zhivago thread!

I would encourage you or anyone to do something with your “ramblings”. It is a good hobby for us as we age. And to be honest, you never know who will read, like or comment on your writing and ones I sometimes think, dare I publish this as I am not confident its quality usually turn out to be the ones people like! Good luck.

Comment on Lita by Steve Smith

Steve Smith — Thu, 17 Apr 2025 10:40:59 +0000

Lita. Great story Graham. Reminded me of a ‘Black Mirror’ short on Netflix. I thought there would be a weird ending! Was she a figment of your imagination? A ghost of someone you loved?

I’m thinking of publishing my ramblings I have written to Grok3